Home !!!!
what is home? what does it
represent ? I have been asking this
question
for a while and I asked it to a lot of people
,almost all of them said the same thing, "Is where I feel
comfortable, surrounded by family to"even the dictionory toke it too simply and difine it "The place where
you live" I notice that every answer started with "where" Is it related to a place? I thought that it
is more spiritual than just a place. For me I haven't realy found a palace that I can call it home
yet, I'm moving but I just cant find my way, I'm surrounded by a millon
routes but which one of them can lead me
home? To be honest, once I thought that I found it, once I thought that I finally
opened this mystery, indeed it was gorgeous from the outside, but when I came
in no one was there, no body was home,
and there where I laid down broken inside, but I stuck with hope and I waited there for someone to
come. The time passed but nothing happend, then suddenly, the house start
cracking untill it break down and scatter over me and become only a small
pieces. Where to
go now, this can't be happening to me, I was lost falling behind and no one
could see me. Where do I belong ? "Soon it will be over, a new one can
make it up for you" they kept
telling me that . Alas!! I dont think so , because it was the only time I
thought that I have a real thing .For me, Home is certainly the arms of the
beloved .
hi nedjmo i thgouht that the subjuct was great but you still writ mysteriously i dont know why but i think it is because you are a littel bit secretive any way it was good keep on writing
ReplyDeletewell , Nedjmo I like what you wrote in this passage ,and I like the words you use because I feel that each word represent the background of your blog
ReplyDeletekeep on
What is A home. other way it will mean that you are speaking about the things that can be found in it .Then in your paragraph you are using a definition paragraph,however you did not support the 2 first ideas enough , after that the grammar you use is good,but you have a lack in the consistency of time.
ReplyDeleteHowever in general is it a good topic a good paragraph so carry on my friend